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  1. #1
    a paradox
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    The Moral Rabbit

    At 2 in the morning a cartoon rabbit appears in the peripheral
    and I am reminded of all the things they told us not to do-
    -that we do.

    [A song, a dance, and a pamphlet
    20 minutes in a classroom, and a ridiculous cartoon rabbit
    to remind me of the virtues of astringent living,
    free from the sweaty hands of an aged frat boy
    delirious with psilocybe mushrooms and Pabst Blue Ribbon]

    You roll over and slide and hand between my thighs
    I know what happens now
    the sleepy dance of primitive want
    lethargic grunts and lazy gropes,
    smoky tongues lapping at alcohol flavored sweat.

    You pull me on to you
    and in your fucked-up daze
    salivate on my neck
    and whisper those things
    heard on cheap Internet porn;
    Like a marionette I open my legs
    and slide you in with all the poise and confidence
    shooters and cosmopolitans can give.

    I wonder when the clear moments are,
    the sober ones that tell the truth
    and shed the uncompromising light of reality
    and responsibility so poignantly forgotten-
    do the burning hands and wet lips
    remain the same after the poison is gone?

    Every once in a while, that ridiculous cartoon rabbit appears
    [usually in the bleary moments
    hunched over a toilet purging alcohol and my sins]
    and skitters around, singing and dancing
    reminding me of the principles so easily discarded;
    the foundation of pure decency
    dismembered and eviscerated by
    a romanticized desire to self destruct with you.

    ---------------------------------------------

    To be honest, i am not sure if this counts as erotic or non-erotic poetry, but i thought i would post it here anyway.

  2. #2
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    I defiantly find it erotic, in a melancholy sort of way. Reminds me of a story I wrote years ago. Poetry can be stimulating but it isn't my weapon of choice.

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    Stark yet intimate. Thoughtful and provoking poem - I love it!

    TYWD

  4. #4
    a paradox
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    Thank You both, TheVariableX and ThisYou Will Do. Poetry is pretty much my "weapon of choice" though i appreciate it very much when those who are somewhat less inclined to it than i am can find my little scratches stimulating, or even thoughtful!

  5. #5
    Workaholic.
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    Ahh the Rabbit... he and I are good friends... Lovly peice. True skill.
    For all those who read this I am:

    "we cover the whole spectrum of love... 'nilla's work to love and not cause pain... we work to love and give needed pain... and love pain and love so much we are in pain..."

    A Male Dom.

    Greetings and Salutations. If you have any questions,or problems, feel free to contact me at anytime. I am here to help.

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