... she puts out the cigarette on her pounding clit. The painslut cries out in orgasmic agony....
Amongst other gripes for the mainstream male version of text-based erotic S&M fiction.. Why would I ever assault (for lack of a better word..) My subs. clit in such a way..? This would lessen sensitivity, and thereby My 'grip' over her..?

No, certainly not sexy..

Some of what was written made Me shift in My seat, in a 'positive' way though..