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[FurryFury]

Got this feedback today:

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

"Furry, what's your hurry,

Oh, yeah, you're writing a story. Ah, well, Baby Cakes, good try. Try some dialogue next time. Make your paragraphs smaller, dear heart."

*cries*

Fury

[fantazmaster]

Fret not Furry and proceed as you will.Do not let some nameless sort discourage this or any other such efforts on your part!BTW,you may want to give a read to the "Unfinished Story" thread under Story Feedback which you may find relevant to this very situation here.

Wonder if perhaps this nameless critic overlooked the fact that you in this situation are not allowed to talk?

Now,onward through the fog,write on!

Got this feedback today:

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

"Furry, what's your hurry,

Oh, yeah, you're writing a story. Ah, well, Baby Cakes, good try. Try some dialogue next time. Make your paragraphs smaller, dear heart."

*cries*

Fury

[Aesop]

Fret not Furry and proceed as you will.Do not let some nameless sort discourage this or any other such efforts on your part!BTW,you may want to give a read to the "Unfinished Story" thread under Story Feedback which you may find relevant to this very situation here.

Wonder if perhaps this nameless critic overlooked the fact that you in this situation are not allowed to talk?

Now,onward through the fog,write on!

Hear!Hear! Don't let them get you down Furry.