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    Consumption

    "Hello, sweet slave..."
    A soft, lingering kiss to her bare shoulder
    The delicate skin,
    Warmed with addictive taste to His lips.

    Her satin lips brushing along the skin of His neck
    Warm breath teasing His senses
    As her tongue snakes along His ear;
    The giving and taking of pain, an aphrodesiac on its own.

    Warm, demanding fingertips, tracing the soft curve of her breast
    As she termbles with the erotic onslaught
    And presses closer, meeting His broad hand.
    Pulling her close, kissing her tenderly as He claims her mouth again.

    What she feels for Him,
    An explosion to the soul, all engulfing;
    His kind hands caressing the soft skin of her thighs
    Adjusting her young body on His lap, feeling that heated throbbing between His legs.

    Parting her bared thighs, exposing the warm mound of her dark heaven
    Hardened flesh pressing to sweet, wet, scorching lips
    A soft gasp of pleasure escaping her as
    His hands move over her heavy, firm breasts.

    Strong hands lowering to the generous curve of her hips
    Feeling the throbbing heat of His body slip
    To the dripping depths of her sweet need,
    A quiet whimper from her lips, as He slides deeper...

    His hungry mouth tasting hers, with
    The consuming heat of their erotic passion
    Her body pushed forward against His desk
    Muscled hand gripping a tight mass of her soft hair.

    Her dark, hungry eyes close, feeling the
    Insatiable throbbing of His hunger, His need
    Buried inside of her tight being
    The steady pulse of His heartbeat so fulfilling.

    Feeling the hot, wet, sensual pleasure of her body
    A low cry erupts from her soul
    Feeling, enduring, remembering
    Her body tightening, in a futile attempt to seal part of Him inside of her.

    Two bodies, aching to please and feel
    Panting with hungered need,
    The hard cool wood against her delicate breasts
    His large body looming over her, holding her.

    Her body trembling with the sensation
    As He forces her to endure this intensity
    While He plunges deep, moving her body with the strenth of Him
    Coating His quivering hunger with her silken warm desire.

    Her body pressing back to meet the brutal fucking nature
    Trembling as she moans, His hand pressed to her back;
    The feel of a silk tie linked gently around her neck
    Cool against the heated, needful skin.

    Each hard thrust of His hips, pressing her thighs close to the edge of the desk
    Tears streak her tender face, feeling
    The long, languished fucking
    The tender strokes...

    The soft metal of a stapler brushing lightly over her pale back
    Jumping softly with the sensation
    As he slows, feeling every gentle stroke of His hunger
    Tracing letters along that precious skin, metal against her body.

    P...A...I...N
    A soft kiss to her back, her neck, her cheek
    As she cries out, pressing hard to the desk
    The sharp pain of the staple sinking deep to her skin, as she screams quietly in pain.

    Drops of crimson blood against pale, glowing flesh
    His soft lips placed over the wound
    Fucking her hard, her body bucking gently with each thrust
    As smoldered tears streak her pale angel's face.

    The silken tie tightening hard around her throat
    Her eyes widening gently, her nails digging to the desk
    His sharp teeth pulling the staple from her back
    Sucking drops of scarlet need to His lips.

    That dark pleasure coursing through them both
    As His warm breath trails over her delicate skin
    Feeling His need swell inside of her
    Crying out in pain, in tormenting release.

    Struggling softly against the tie around her throat, feeling the digging pain
    Trembling hard against the surface of His desk
    The cool mahogany against her skin
    While He explodes within her body.

    Filling her so completely, the power within crests and breaks them both
    The tie loosened softly, as she coughs, gasping
    Surrendering to Him
    As the kiss is tenderly broken.

    Whispering soft words of comfort to her ears
    Gently lifting her limp body from the desk,
    Holding her close as he cradles her to His heart
    Breasts rising and falling as she breathes, safe, loved, treasured.

    copyright © Tracey Cobb
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    WOnderful! . . . . it is almost overpowering in its length and the number if images and emotions it invokes. This is one that demands it be re-read several times to really gather the whole of it. I found that I kept getting caught up in one image and having to stop and return to read again something that I missed.
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
    Robert A. Heinlein, Friday

    To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.

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    Thankyou for the comment and the criticism TDS
    That is largely what I was aiming for in this piece - a series of all consuming and powerful images that made you FEEL so deeply. I wanted it to be something powerful, and I think I accomplished that.

    What particular images caught your attention?
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    Feeling the hot, wet, sensual pleasure of her body
    A low cry erupts from her soul
    Feeling, enduring, remembering
    Her body tightening, in a futile attempt to seal part of Him inside of her.


    I really like this one in particular. . . . . it seems to wrap up a whole all consuming total body and mind emotion

    you should consider entering this one in the poetry contest.
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
    Robert A. Heinlein, Friday

    To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.

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    LOL. Thats the second time you've mentioned it. Alright. Which one?
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    pj great once more but again I sure wish sometime someone would get laid in your writings. You sure put the mind's eye to work with all you write.
    WB

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbaby1943 View Post
    pj great once more but again I sure wish sometime someone would get laid in your writings. You sure put the mind's eye to work with all you write.
    You know someone got laid in that, cheeky bugger. Thankyou Warbaby: as always, your comments are more than welcome.
    ...we can be forgiven...


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    pj, I really like this writing. so much visualization.... moans and wanders off.

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    Thankyou Wolf... very much.
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    Quote Originally Posted by poetic_justice View Post
    You know someone got laid in that, cheeky bugger. Thankyou Warbaby: as always, your comments are more than welcome.
    LMAO but you are so welcome and so talented.
    WB

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    This poem is mmmmmmmmm!

    Your descriptions and storytelling abilities are extremely titilating
    bad girls, bad girls....
    what ya gonna do when they come for you?

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    Thankyou very much orchidsoul
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