DangerousSins offered the words: onomatopoeia, spank , puppy
SPANK
spank her
and listen
to those little whimpers
spank her
tangle fingers in that lustrous hair
pull that lovely head back
and gaze
into those puppy dog eyes
brimming with as-yet unshed tears
taste those tears
lifting them with Your fingertips
raising them to Your lips
sigh
with only the tiniest of regrets
but a burgeoning anticipation
of the onomatopoeia
of the slap
the smack
the crack
as Your hand meets supple flesh
again
and again
and again....
~~ elyse
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11-28-2006 #1kitsune
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For DangerousSins: Spank
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11-28-2006 #2
wonderful... . . heheheheh . . . very ingenious way to integrate a hard word.
“Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
” ― Robert A. Heinlein, Friday
To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.
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11-28-2006 #3Practically Perfect
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You are seriously gifted! You rock! I love it!
“There is only one real sin, and that is to persuade oneself that the second-best is anything but the second-best.”
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11-28-2006 #4Under Master_Rob's wing
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Wow wow wow!
Kneeling before You, at Your side, i have found where i belong, my purpose, my direction~i give myself to You completely, without question, knowing it is now as it was always meant to be~i love You Sir
Master_Rob's loving pet now and always!
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11-28-2006 #5Falling deep...
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That is great, elyse. You are really gifted. Loved it.
Lips slip
Fingers linger
Heart starts
Well, that was quick
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11-28-2006 #6searching...
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Fantastic
...we can be forgiven...
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11-28-2006 #7Registered User
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Amazing.
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11-29-2006 #82nd Generation
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Ok, now I'm in the mood.... now if only I could go home
My breath, my light, my soul is training her.
Training Pet_Amanda....
Master Haven
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12-01-2006 #9
elyse, your writing, your poetry always leave me shaking my head, so gentile, expressive, expansive, your intelligence and knowledge is evident and so creative...showing the beauty of you. Thank you
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12-01-2006 #10Guest 91108Guest
oh my.. how did i miss this one.
Sighs.... very nice......
I think i see a book of erotica coming.
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12-01-2006 #11Wanderer
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As always, you write with such class. And to wiggle out of that word, such skill as well. ;-)
Mit diesem Herz hab ich die Macht
die Augenlider zu erpressen
ich singe bis der Tag erwacht
ein heller Schein am Firmament
Mein Herz brennt
- Rammstein
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12-02-2006 #12Solitaire
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As always, beautiful imagery that leads my mind to explore further.... I can see her lips trembling as she fights to hold back the tears....
Wonderful!"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law. Love is the Law. Love under Will."
Aleister Crowley
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