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For DangerousSins: Spank
DangerousSins offered the words: onomatopoeia, spank , puppy
SPANK
spank her
and listen
to those little whimpers
spank her
tangle fingers in that lustrous hair
pull that lovely head back
and gaze
into those puppy dog eyes
brimming with as-yet unshed tears
taste those tears
lifting them with Your fingertips
raising them to Your lips
sigh
with only the tiniest of regrets
but a burgeoning anticipation
of the onomatopoeia
of the slap
the smack
the crack
as Your hand meets supple flesh
again
and again
and again....
~~ elyse
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wonderful... . . heheheheh . . . very ingenious way to integrate a hard word.
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You are seriously gifted! You rock! I love it!
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That is great, elyse. You are really gifted. Loved it.
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Ok, now I'm in the mood.... now if only I could go home ;)
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elyse, your writing, your poetry always leave me shaking my head, so gentile, expressive, expansive, your intelligence and knowledge is evident and so creative...showing the beauty of you. Thank you
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oh my.. how did i miss this one.
Sighs.... very nice......
I think i see a book of erotica coming.
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As always, you write with such class. And to wiggle out of that word, such skill as well. ;-)
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As always, beautiful imagery that leads my mind to explore further.... I can see her lips trembling as she fights to hold back the tears....
Wonderful!
